I see a Newbie!. Just practise a lot when you have free time. I was exactly like this at first but i started getting better & better everytime.. I understand its your first map but next time make it better.

This map reminds me of a lot of prototype Jedi Outcast maps I've played.

Ehh...

Everybody made crappy maps in the beginning, nothing wrong with that - but why does it get common to upload them to ..::LvL? I mean one of the good things about this website is that the average quality of the maps is great and that you do NOT have to sort out 90% of the stuff because it's bullshit...

if ya need help etc with ya next release send me an email, id be happy to help

vnekOnator, please take some extra time and care when making maps. Personally, I've never released any of my maps because I felt like they've never reached a high enough level of quality to release. However, each of them are still better than any map you've released to date. I could whip together a map like this in 10 minutes. Mapping takes a lot of time and patience. Until you dedicate more time to a map, instead of trying to make as many as possible, and you beta test your maps before release, the community in general won't ever receive your maps well at all.

On the plus side, at least you finally released a map with an AAS and arena file.

It's about QUALITY not QUANTITY!

why?