I just wanted to say that the bugs on the map (the arches) have been fixed and is now renamed to apedmm1, so if you want to download ths version, try

home.swipnet.se/dark/apedmm1.zip

Well, you certainly have talent, but this map lacks a strong theme. Next time choose one color theme (especially in terms of lighting) and use less intensive colours. The map shows you know how to design architectural features, but things like that x-cross decorations should only be used if you have it in the theme. This particular spot is, IMO, way out of place. But, go on and try to develop a bit more subtle sense for decoration and layout and your future is bright :)