The only thing I would change is the doors... To me it feels like they get in the way more than anything else. A neat work around might have been to have more traditionally styled (for doom) door stuck in the up position. As if they were permanently opened due to a puzzle solved elsewhere. (I'm thinking of Doom 2's Tricks and Traps). You'd still have the appearance of divided sections and door ways for the sake of keeping the look, but without having to actually battle the doors.
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Oh golly, this takes me back... but yes, I have always tried to keep a consistent tone, to evoke a sense of place in time with my maps. I'm entirely happy if it's "too Doomish" - that was kind of the point. (Hence the blue key, BTW)

I have noticed your maps are very simple and you use the same texture for one particular map you make. I actually think this map is good but next time try to experiment with more textures. I feel like this map is created from a Doom game.

@Michael: Neither. This is a Quake 3 site.

Is created it be doom or doom 2 ?

In retrospect, I tend to agree... ;)

The commentor is wrong. This map is just another tech map. Except it's not as pretty or well put together as its predecessors.

6/10.