not bad, especially for a first map, god knows my first map (not found on this site) is a piece of steaming dog shit! (if ure interested e-mail me and i'll send it to you- sicdeth@aol.com) i liked the items placed over the jump pads, and i liked the spiraling window of the teleporter, also it makes for a good place to teleport to so people cant just sit there in the healing pod and kill people as they try to walk in, the sound file was a little messed up, it didnt work all the time and if it did, the jumping sounds that the player makes will pause the music/sounds. overall pretty cool map and well done job for a first map.
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