I'm not saying this is a great map, just not bad for a first attempt!!!!
well, the sence (sic!) in putting out maps for morons to scoff at is to get some relevant feedback. This map was done in the initial and very likely foolhardy excitement of actually getting something out of a level editor. for most people here, it's a hobby, and while I can (and will) adhere to some of the criticism (like missing caulk and ap's, which I didn't even know about when I started building 2 1/2 months ago), I think an open forum like this could be used more efficiently; plus, not everyone that builds maps has 36 hours a day to spend on doing just that. The "beta" post is a great idea, oh mighty lvl-lord, and hopefully will be up soon.
That said, I give my map a "4", and suggest you go visit www.somethingawful.com for a very funny review... :-)
AssBall... get a dictionary, a life, or at the very least an inflatable doll.
(I came, I saw, I deleted.)