I laughed so hard when I saw the map name :). It's a pretty amateur map really but I can't blame you because it is your first map and you have not had the proper experience like other mappers.

I could think of ten ways to make the map better.

Instead of just black why not spice things up and make it a cloudy skybox and add fog of death below of the same color to make it look as if the map is floating in the atmosphere of a gas giant-type planet. And instead of jump pads make them walkways. Jump pads are waaaaaaaaaaaaay overused.

...ouch!

I did try to warn you.....

But you just wouldn't listen.