This is Hans' first level. With that said I'll try to be as constructive as possible. I think this is supposed to be an object-floating-in-space map, but there's lava at the bottom. No walls to hold it in, just lava. The idea of a floating-above-lava map is a good one, but some architecture to explain the lava would help. The map seems to only use a couple of textures, so let's build some compound walls, ok? I am impressed with the selection and use of map models though. Since this map was built on August 19 and his CTF level ToFace was built on August 26, Hans is improving fast.
Don't grab this one, but look for future work by the author. He's got some good ideas and is learning fast.
Reviewed by BadMonkey